Pitch Proposal #1
Feb 9, 2021
Today, I had gotten some feedback on my video from some of my classmates that focused on my statistics. I had been told that I should focus my statistics on a state or even local community level on top of my national statistics. I agree with this feedback because I believe having the most viable statistics makes my pitch sound more convincing. My video had some technical difficulties, but I still got my pitch through even with these tech problems. Some other feedback I had gotten were to make the picture and slides I used show on the screen for longer so that way it’s easier to view and take in.
